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I wonder why I loved you so

by Toni Sweeney (Age: 30)
copyright 07-25-2003


Age Rating: 7 +

As I cry
the tears
I cry
I wonder why I love you so

As I cry
the tears
I cry
I wonder why
I deal with the pain
you have given me
through out my life

As I cry
the tears
I cry
I wonder why
you love me so

As I cry
the tears
I cry
I wonder
why I have not left you yet

As I cry
I know why
I deal with your pain you gave to me

Now that I am leaving you
I wonder why
you cry
the tears
you cry






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        06-26-2010     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

This poem was on the repetitive side, but the sentiment expressed is very true. The kind of feelings that can't be broken, no matter how much a person is forced to endure, are very precious and rare. Good work!


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        07-22-2006     Tammy Frascona        

Prose-N-Poetry all the way. That was so beautiful and good! I have asked my self these same questions before and have been here more than once. Great Poem Toni!

        11-13-2003     Jasmine Hicks        

Very nice poem Toni, yet sad, I know what the feelings you put into this are, I've been through the same. Just keep it up, write what your heart tells you too and your poems will always be just as good as this one



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