I loved how you took a modern-day romance of two hearts,be them besotted or veridically in love,
and transmuted the incidental behaviour of the relationship into an archaic phantasy that
transpires in a realm that once was.The intrigue
of how love was esteemed long ago is still quite prevalent I see.Men are different now.Women are different now.There are still people that roam the earth whom realize the meaning of true love; you declare yourself as one of these people.So
nice to see that you have not allowed the emphatic marathon race for pecuniary gain to overrun your virtues and morals.Sincerely,Eric
Her own prince Charming
Came to court her
Left her in the castle
Only to desert her (divorce her)
That was my favourite part. I can't believe how beautiful this is. I could hear the emotion, reading it aloud. Such a wonderful poem.
The stone walls of the heart, I'm assuming. I know how that feels. Every girl is a princess locked in that chamber at some point or another. Great piece.
This is a great poem.
You do need to fix stanza 4 however.
I think you meant, "And now she don't know"
Keep up the good work.