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by hedwig (Age: 25)
copyright 06-11-2005


Age Rating: 1 +

Little kids, teenagers, adults.
Look a car, some drunks inside.
Harmless, right?
Everytime you snap the bottle, you chug it down.
You kill a life.
POW! POW! BOOM! BOOM!
Many money is spent on new cars.
So little for liquor.
There destroyed in one day of party.
"That's okay, they were just having fun!"
Is what your mommy said when you all died.
POW! POW! BOOM! BOOM!
You love somebody?
They died because of you!
"I can drive with liquor inside me."
You killed your lover!
POW! POW! BOOM! BOOM!
Remember your prom?
How they show the bent up cars.
Didn't you know that was from drunk driving?
No you didn't.
Why, are you stupid or something?
No! You were drunk!
POW! POW! BOOM! BOOM!






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        06-12-2005     Paul Kangas        

This poem is so true. I have lost family members to that. This poem is so unique and different and it tells the truth. Really good job! Loved it!

always,
Paul

        06-12-2005     Anthony Lane Stahlhut        

Drinking and driving kills so many, but we spend lots more on keeping pot from crossing the border than we do for teaching school children what drinking and driving does! Thanks, Anthony

        06-11-2005     David Pekrul        

This is to the point and hard-hitting, but those who drink and drive will probably never read this; if they did, maybe they would stop. This is a lot along the same lines as my poem "Driving Drunk".
Good message and well written. WILL YOU PEOPLE PLEASE LISTEN!!!!



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