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Richard Reed Jr
Embrace the cold
Embrace the darkness
Yes, it''s most definitely your life, you have the right. The cold, darkness, nothingness, fears
are all embraced by the warmth, the light, fullness, and confidence, therefore they neutralize each other and neither exists.
Another well-written philosophical masterpiece.
Ricky of the UN-commenting heretics
This is pretty good, but remember that, no matter what you do or where you go in life, everyone gets hurt sometimes. And sometimes people can make you feel better too, not everybody will always hold you back; in fact, noone has the power to do that. You are the only one who can hold you back. But very good *claps* ^^
Looks like I get to take the first comment! YAY!
Wow! This is REALLY good. Kinda dark too. I think what got me liking this poem was the fact that it didn't rhyme, but it still had a rhythm. It also seemed to show fear. And what you were and what you have become. I believe that people should embrace there fears, and not run away. But, I think that the world, though, I must agree a lot of people are uncaring, that there are some people out there that care, and want to care. Fear seems to not let us see what is before us. Trusting the world is hard. Believe me, I've thought the world's turned it's back on ME one too many times, but still forgiveness has to come eventually.
Anyway, about the parent thing, maybe you should try to talk to your parents and discuss your thoughts. I probably sound like a shrink or something, but I really think that talking to parents can solve a lot of things.
Anyway, the poem rocked! It showed hard times and the past and now. I think that's what I like about the poem. Knowing that there are people that have to go through dificult times, too.
Your fellow comment crusader,