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When I see you

by Lonnie Kornoely (Age: 40)
copyright 05-03-2006

Age Rating: 10 +
When I see you

When I see you, I see the sunshine.

When I see you, I see the best of mankind.

When I see you, I see Godís beauty devin.

When I see you, I feel warm inside.

When I see you, I want to hold you tight.

When I see you, you make my smile shine.

When I see you, I have a special twinkle in my eye.

When I see you, I know love is alive.

When I see you, I know I see the girl of my dreams.

Dedicated to the love of my life.

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        05-05-2006     David Pekrul        

Right out of a Hallmark card, but in a good way. Written from your own feelings makes this good. Simple but effective.

        05-05-2006     Regina Pate        

Very nicely written, in a sing song kind of way, nice style, and good flow, Great write, good job, thanks,


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