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Wow! This poem is packed with great images, and the text matches the photo perfectly. That makes me wonder which came first, the photo or the poem. I often see an image or hear something that makes me think of writing a poem. Is that the case here? I hate to think that all the dark poems I read here reflect truly desperate authors. Finally, from the nitpicker in me, did you really mean "bare it", or did you intend "bear it" ? Great job!