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Pitch Black

by Susan Brown (Age: 58)
copyright 12-21-2008

Age Rating: 16 +

~ The Dilemma ~

Pitch the forest, black
Owl hoots, treetop snaps...
Mice hide in towering grass
Pitch the forest, black
Ferns line, this shallow path
Dampness floats where motion can't
Can I feel the draft?
Yes, pitch the forest, black!

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        02-07-2013     Rachel Brown        

This poem has a Very nice flow
in the way the words rhyme only in the middle line.
I love it Keep up the excellent work Susan.
Keep Smiling and Keep Writing as well^_^
^_* ^_^
-Rachel ^_^
More Haiku Please *_*

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