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Falling Apart

by phantomwrays (Age: 25)
copyright 05-28-2010

Age Rating: 13 +

I've fried my brain,

And broke my heart.

I'm held together by tape,

Because I'm falling apart.

They've talked my ears off,

They've bruised my arms.

I can barely hold myself up

Because I'm falling apart.

My tongues gone numb

And I can't feel my toes.

Where my feelings gone,

Nobody knows.

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        06-11-2013     betterthingstocome        

Hello Victoria (I read your author's page)

I thought this was a cute little tale. Thank you for sharing. I know there are times I feel like nothing could hold me together anymore. Your writing gave me a slight chuckle.

        06-11-2010     Mae Futter Stein        

Hi Victoria,
Wow! You did all that to yourself? I hope you don't fall too much apart. LOL. I don't know what to tell you, but I do hope your tongues numbness comes back. It would be awful if you couldn't talk. LOL. Your poem is cute and full of a lot of things that makes it different and unique.

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