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OLD SMOKE

by dbiscotti (Age: 61)
copyright 04-16-2012


Age Rating: 18 +

 

After you left I found a yellowed bent cigarette

In the back of a disused desk drawer

The faded words printed on the side read: Chesterfield Kings

I lit up the ancient thing

I inhaled the stale aroma deep into my lungs

It was the best damn smoke I ever had

(For M)

 







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        05-24-2012     Frank Fields        

As with your previous work, this one is age-rated too high. It doesn't contain anything that is offensive or shouldn't be read by even very young people. Just a thought. The piece itself is short but well-presented and has an emotional content that appeals.

Frank :)



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