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WEEPING ROSE

by Salvador Ortega (Age: 54)
copyright 06-01-2012


Age Rating: 13 +

slashed rose

bleeding

leaving violets

beneath cooled veins

heart haunted by love

exposed purple souls

weeping lavender

perfumed farewells







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        06-28-2012     Susan Brown        

Salvador,
For me, the scent of a the perfumed farewell, lingered. I really liked that line. This piece was vivid in detail. Good effort. I look forward to reading more.
Susan



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