Wow this was powerful. Really amazing, the rhyming, the rhythm and the concept especially. It's good you have a strong grasp on your faith. I feel time does make fools of us all, but if we believe in God, we will be strong. We all face battles against the world, but it doesn't compare to the war we are to face in the future. But with God's help we will fight strong and true. Excellent job with this. God bless.