I've Fallen In Love (The Out-takes)
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
Age Rating: 7 +
I once was a child when so much younger
But then I grew just a little stronger
Transormed into a teen when I "grew up"
With infinite knowledge and endless luck
Now, a new phase, I'm faced with adulthood
Becoming one with my own womanhood
Nothing to me has been this frightening...
like a storm in life wrought with lightning!
Finally alone, and afraid I stood
where fearless folks often would
And then I realized that there I was
and had to admit that I'd become
All I'd admired about my mother
and all good qualities of any other
I've finally fallen in love with who I am
Because I now realize that I can!
Wasn't sure what to do with this...
I'm not happy with it, but am working on it still.
I wasn't going to post it but it seems there are folks that need to read something positive... and so I thought what my mother said just might be true... it's the thought that counts. *smile*
- BrytEyz (6-18-02)
Well, who thought it would take me TWO YEARS to come back to this, eh? I've amended a couple awkward parts and would love to know if anyone has any other suggestions. Oh, and thanks to Gregory Christiano. You are a marvlous voice here on PnP and I cherish your advice/opinions immensely! Thank you very much.
- BrytEyz (9-5-04)